Sleeping Valor

If you remember, in the book they have that war where the two sides are separated by a river and Alanna gets kidnapped. Big Thor was one of the regular ...

^_^ Thanks for the comments guys. Hmm, you're right about her personality methinks. I actually wrote different versions of this and at some point joined them into one--which was interesting ...

:D Yay! I love readers who comment. (Apparently there are some who don't! I might have more fans than I know. =P But I won't let myself get conceited thinking ...

=P When I get through DoaV (or maybe while) I will continue this plot. It's in fantasy because very soon after these first two parts, my MC gets taken to ...

=P Sorry about the length. I had no idea how long it was and sort of posted it as I went. >.< I only saw after that it was 13 ...

Okay. So, though I know I went and threatened to start the whole story over in a new setting... I am over it. I've decided that I don't need to ...

Thanks Woz! I do hope I get to publish this sometime. I've hit a bit of a block, because much like you I don't care much for the antagonists side ...

lol. No, I did intend the stylized description comment for you. ^_^ It was more of a 'this is what I'm going to do' as opposed to a direct response ...

Thanks for the critique! I will be working on more detail when I come back to fix all the things people mentioned in the prologue. And yes, her name is ...

This was the original P1 of Chapter two, now replaced by the new version. Feedback on it would be cool, since I still have to introduce these characters. =P Chapter ...

It's fine. That's what people do. Sides, I will be (lol, I should do that soon, since it's on the internet) be taking precautions to protect my copyright--since I have ...

Thanks guys! I appreciate your critiques. Woz-Take your time. I know that writing a detailed critique can take time. Thanks for just reading and letting me know you liked it. ...

George is the best. ^_^ They're kid is cool too (she has her own sequel! I'm re-reading it right now). And oficially, they actually have...3 kids. =P He's cool though, ...

Yuppers. remember, they go to the Black City and face those Old Ones or w/e they were called. They expose her for being a girl in an attempt to weaken ...

Yes, he knows. If you read the first book, you'll remember he found out when they fought the bad guys at the end. (he sees her all naked while he's ...